The memorials

The memorials
: I went to see the models and presentations of the eight finalists for the World Trade Center memorial today.

There are two I could like. There are others I could hate.

They are all complex — too complex. As I said yesterday, a memorial should have one clear idea eloquently expressed: the Lincoln Memorial, the Washington Memorial, the Vietnam Memorial, the Berlin Holocaust Memorial all meet that test. None of these proposals does.

You can see my own proposal here. Let me make clear that I never thought for a second that mine would progress; that’s not why I made it. I made it because I had to; it was a proper tribute, a necessary step in healing. So my reaction to these finalists is not as a participant but as a witness, a mourner, a pilgrim, a survivor, a New Yorker.

Here is my reaction to each:

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: Votives in Suspension is the one I like best. And that surprises me. In photos, it looks cluttered. In the model, it looks elegant. It provides a space for contemplation — sanctuaries, they’re called — that are beautiful and quiet. The open space with the hanging lights, the votives, is a canvas on which to place your own memories and thoughts. It is dramatic … inventive … unique … appropriate. The top-level view of the site is clean and, in fact, uncluttered and does an excellent job of marking the edges of both the site and the footprints of the towers. Except for John F. Kennedy’s eternal flame, I cannot think of prominent memorials that will depend on ongoing fuel and that is new; here is a memorial that must be kept up; it cannot just sit in the weather like a slab of granite. And that is good; this memory must be tended. Among these finalists, this is my choice.

: Dual Memory has one element I like: Large photos of some of the heroes and innocents who died there. That is what I so wanted to see in this memorial: Memory of the people who lost their lives as more than names in stone; I want to see the people just as we saw them on the streetcorners of New York and then in the pages of The Times. I want a human memorial. Other than that, this proposal is confused, trying to create many elements, each with symbolism that will be clearer to its creators than to its visitors. The inside space is warm and of the right scale; the outside space is a bit of a mess, trying to do too much. It need not give us dual memory. A single vision of memory would be sufficient and appropriate.

: Suspending Memory shocked and almost offended me. The small columns that rise up look too much like tombstones to me: a cemetery is the last thing we need here. But it is worse: Each of them is of the shape of a World Trade Center tower. So the tombstones mimic the tombs in which these people died. Yet worse, as I examined one of the columns, I saw lines that are meant to give us the name and age of the victim but these lines looked like too many of the newspaper graphics that marked the floors of the dead. All this imagery of the towers themselves seems — quite unintentionally — disturbing, cold, almost tasteless.

: Lower Waters looks like nothing so much as a Frank Lloyd Wright outtake. Its spaces are terribly chilling and inhuman. It is confusing, lacking any coherent vision and message that I can see.

: Passages of Light is, at first, a dramatic concept: light above and below, coming through thousands of white tubes. In two dimensions, it looks appealing. In three dimensions, it looks like a 1962 bank headquarters gone mad — or the perhaps instead the set of the next Star Wars movie. It shows off. It is a case of the designer trying to outshine the memorial and the message and those memorialized.

: Garden of Lights is gimicky and, like most of the others, tries to throw together too many ideas: more tubes of light, more columns sticking up, cold spaces, a walk with names and roses almost as an afterthought. It appears to have been conceived by committee.

: Reflecting Absence is built around water and I’m sorry to say this, but it reminds me of an aquarium. And the ground-level view of tile looks like a bathtub in the bathtub. The water in constant motion seems unsettling, as if there is never a moment of peace here.

: Inversion of Light is sleek but in a bad way — sleek like a modernistic airport. It, too, is busy. It, too, uses water, rushing by a wall of names. It, too, has cold and inhuman spaces.

They have the original boards from each entry hanging near the models and images. I can’t imagine how the judges saw what they saw in those posters. They are so very abstract and necessarily brief; they give snippets of a view rather than a vision. But these boards from the professionals did make me feel a bit better about my own clumsy and amateurish board; I probably expressed my idea as well as I could.

I was also struck by how architectural all these are. As I said yesterday, all the finalists are architects or designers who might as well be architects and that shows clearly in these boards: Architects selected architects, for they all speak a language they understand best. I’m not sure that language will speak to the hearts of the millions who will come to this space to find memory and comfort and pain and healing. They will find architecture.

Even the Votives of Light, as imaginative and beautiful as they are, may not be as sweeping and simple and clear — and eternal — as they should be.

I wonder whether we are rushing this project. As much as I want to see the space rebuilt — as happy as I am to see the PATH and its life and utility returning to the site — I do not want to see us hurry to lay down a vision from today that will not live into tomorrow. For our first duty is to remember. We must remember well.

5 responses to “The memorials”

  1. Internet Ronin Avatar

    This essay is the finest piece of your writing that it has been my pleasure to read, and I have read, and enjoyed much here. I was genuinely moved by the time I finished. Thank you, Jeff!

  2. Sarah e.g. Avatar
    Sarah e.g.

    I like the hanging lights too. I like the idea of a physical representation of each person that died–it has more impact than just a list of names, and it’s a terrific idea to vary the strands in length according to the age of the victim.
    Unlike any of the other designs, I’d go out of my way to visit this one.
    I only wish it were bigger and more solid. It’s got a wistful, ephemeral feeling about it, which would be fitting, for, say, a memorial for children who died of leukemia or something, but not for an attempt by terrorists to destroy our country. I’d like to see these lights suspended in a huge, solid (secular) cathedral-type building with vaulted ceilings that go up forever.

  3. Mike G Avatar

    Lileks says something like this this morning but I have thought it for a while. Do we trust ourselves as a culture to take care of a monument that requires constant maintenance? Granite weathers and lasts, but video screens or votives or whatever will have to be upgraded, which means they will sit broken for years while the bid process and the technical issues work themselves out.
    Let’s remember that it was only a few years ago that there was some threat to remove Grant’s Tomb from New York because it was so neglected. (It’s certainly ignored up there in Columbia Peacenikville; I took some locals there once when I was visiting, and they looked at me funny the whole time, like what kind of sicko wants to honor a general?) Or consider the poor Hall of Fame– THE original Hall of Fame, not the Bowlers’ or Burger-Flippers’ Hall of Fame, established in the late 19th century to honor dead white males of eternal fame (like Matthew Maury and Rufus Choate), which now sits rather forlornly and unvisited on the campus of Bronx Community College. (See http://www.bcc.cuny.edu/HallofFame/HallofFame.htm)

  4. Lola Avatar

    I agree. That’s why I applaud the decision to open the other submissions to public view. I’d like it very much if they could put up a vote box for the public to vote which submission they liked the best. What they choose may not end up being one of the finalist choices.

  5. Brian McConnell Avatar
    Brian McConnell

    As much as I like some of the designs, my take on this is that we are rushing too quickly. I was expecting to see the ‘best of’ widely differing approaches to the memorial, including modern art/architecture, but also including more classical approaches, tall designs, and open space.
    In evaluating the designs, I suggest comparing them to the temporary memorial, Tribute in Light. I was in NYC when it was lit up for the first time. Everyone around me was awed by it. It was simple, beautiful and iconic. You could also see it from miles away, so someone remembering a lost friend could glance out their window, and there it was.
    I was hoping to see something similarly simple, beautiful and iconic, something that would capture the totality of what happened on 9/11. I was disappointed not to see that. I saw many nice designs, but I don’t think they will age well.